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underestimated

MandaPanda

What more am I to love than a wilting flower?
Broken leaves like shattered dreams
Tucked away in the corner
Reaching toward the black earth
Singled out from all the rest
In this garden full of vanity and grace...

What more am I to care about than a decaying willow?
Hopes dripping from vines brown with death
Alone in a spring green field
Forgotten just like yesteryear
Hollow from days spent weeping
Never to be noticed by anyone at all...

What more am I to hold onto than a frightened orphan child?
Seen by few in those dark night alleys
Praying to be noticed in this cardboard heaven
Wandering lost down cold city streets
Longing for love
Wishing for a caring family to whisk them away to happiness...

And what less am I to you than a sorrowful young girl?
Talented in the art of expression
Sweet like sugar on a hot summer day
Screaming 'HELP' in world that hears only what it wants
Finally given a chance to escape into the spotlight
Only to be forgotten yet again...

Comments

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[info]ddrfaeryspice wrote:
Jul. 15th, 2005 06:47 am (UTC)
wah, i want to set your words to music. can i just climb inside your brain and huggle your muses to death???
[info]i_heart_mana wrote:
Jul. 15th, 2005 01:28 pm (UTC)
^_^ Those muses of mine only seem to spawn depressing poems/songs.
[info]ddrfaeryspice wrote:
Jul. 15th, 2005 02:23 pm (UTC)
it's totally not depressing. just gorgeous imagery. *climbs inside, settles down into a beanbag, and clicks on the tv in full-color melon-vision* let's see what's on today! :D
[info]i_heart_mana wrote:
Jul. 15th, 2005 03:27 pm (UTC)
^_^ Full-color Melon-vision...That has just been dubbed the best line ever.

And thanks for the compliment on the imagery! I alwaysthought my writing sucked...
[info]ddrfaeryspice wrote:
Jul. 17th, 2005 09:03 am (UTC)
nah. it was neat-o. :D and i'm glad you liked that phrase. sometimes mah brainz are genius! or just kinda silly. ^^;
[info]tanai_richtner wrote:
Jul. 16th, 2005 04:21 pm (UTC)
Heeeey, you could write us some lyrics too! *snuggles teh Toki-chan* I love this, by the way <3
[info]i_heart_mana wrote:
Jul. 16th, 2005 04:25 pm (UTC)
*ish snuggled* Maybe I should put up more of my work once I get my poembooks from Renee's?
[info]tanai_richtner wrote:
Jul. 16th, 2005 04:34 pm (UTC)
Hai, you should *nods* I wants to read them alllllllllllllllll! :D
[info]i_heart_mana wrote:
Jul. 16th, 2005 04:36 pm (UTC)
XD Okie
[info]akomai_shugaioh wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2005 12:03 am (UTC)
Yaaay! *belated as usual, runs into the wall as pennance* I wants to see the works of teh toki as well!
[info]i_heart_mana wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2005 12:25 am (UTC)
Awww. *huggles*
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